Group Essay

1. What You Haven't Seen.
I have changed my concrete details and altered some of the meanings that I thought connected more to the topic.By doing so, I took out the parts that have modern society thoughts about the topic and how I compared them. Also, I found other synonyms for the word " marriage" since I find that I'm using the word too much in my paragraph.

2. So I had a question... Do you think " I hope not Algernon. It would put my table completely out. Your uncle would have to dine upstairs. Fortunately he is accustomed to that." -Lady Bracknell Pg 18. Do you think think quote ties in with the topic? I can somehow relate it how its a lies within marriage by like, in Victorian era people usually dine together so its like contradicting that they don't eat together( play). Also wouldn't it be that men would dine more on the dining table than women? since basically they are the head of the household.

Dishonesty in The Importance of Being Earnest

Throughout the three acts in The Importance of Being Earnest, dishonesty is portrayed. Especially through the contradictions of what the characters say earlier. Although the characters don't notice that they are contradicting themselves of what they said earlier. For example, in Act III Jack said that he doesn't have a brother nor does he want one. But, later on he discovers that Algernon is his younger brother and is saying how he has a brother and that he wanted one for so long. Sometimes, when the characters like Jack and Algernon say something , they contradict it later with something else that doesn't make sense or fit into what they are saying. Also, there are times when an epigram about life is said but doesn't quite make sense. It's like the epigram is the opposite of what it means today.

In my opinion, I think that Wilde is saying that there is at least once in your life that you will be dishonest. In the play The Importance of Being Earnest, is shown that Algernon and Jack tends to show dishonesty more than half of their lifetime. Also, I think that the play teaches a lesson of life to people who read it. Although lies can bring you a bad ending, if you just clear up the lies in the end then there's still a chance that you will feel happier. But, to tell lies is definitely not a good thing to do at all.

Animal Farm Project Evaluations

1. Rachel-slide show game

   Rachel's project of " Animal Farm" is very well done. The ideas weren't just on the surface. But, instead the questions that were on the slide show game were more in depth. Causing people to think more deeply into the layer of the surface of each idea. Also, the questions brings out some of the foreshadowing and irony.

2. Kamron- Picture

   Kamron's project was well done. He showed some foreshadowing on his picture. Also, he related some of the ideas to the Russian Revolution. But, I thought that he could add some irony into the picture.

3. Leah- Comic Strip

   Leah's comic strip was very well done. I liked how she showed the same thing in visual, but she uncovers the hidden meaning of Napoleon's sayings. There were a moderate amount of irony and foreshadowing in the comic.

4. Olivia W.- Poem, Haiku

   I liked Olivia's project, that's because although it was short, the meaning conveyed through the poem was pretty strong. Instead of doing a long and broad idea, she could sum the whole thing up in just a couple of words.

5. Olivia T.- Picture

   Very cute project~ Olivia! I liked how your picture showed that humans and animals went back to original state of being. Although I think you could show some foreshadowing in the picture and your caption of the picture.

6. Galen- Comic Strip

   Nice comic~ the comic showed the events throughout the whole novel. I liked how you could somehow fit some of the hidden meanings that were said in the book. Also, you had some foreshadowing in your comic of how the animals would get led to a downfall of the farm.

7. Sara- picture

   Your picture is very cute~ I like how you compared the animals' everyday lives. You had very good foreshadowing points. Although I thought that you could add some irony.

8. Blog of the Swimmer- Poem

   I like how you kept the poem short and included things that weren't human. Also, how you  described tyranny as a poem about Animal Farm.

9. Maddie- Picture

   Cute picture~ the equation diagram is very unique to me. That is because, usually a person would put a draw in a equation about a novel. But, you did it. There was foreshadowing but there doesn't seem to be any irony in the picture. Good job on the drawing.

10. Britta S- poem

   Great poem! It was very well thought about, I can tell. The way you summarized the novel and showed many literature was unique! I would really give this project a A+++!

After looking at my classmates' projects, I thought mine needed more work. Especially after reading Britta's poem about "Animal Farm". But, I thought that I did a pretty good job though I could improve a lot more. In a scale, I think my project is kind of a little bit below the middle of the scale of Britta( the best!) and Kamron's.

Extra Credit Blog: New Years Resoulution

A new year has come upon us, what would we look forward to? I for once thought that if I were to make ANY resolution, I wouldn't keep to that promise. But, I should try again shouldn't I? This year I plan to try to figure out, or have a single clue on what I would want to be when I grow up. On Tuesday, walking with my mother shopping for clothes, she suddenly stopped out of the blue and said " Ting, you should become a fashion designer when you grow up." Since I sill don't know what I want to be when I grow up, I would open up to any suggestions. But, I don't really get what shes going to...saying that I should be a dentist when I become a adult last year, then this year now say that I should be a fashion designer. But, if I were to pick I would want to be a fashion designer. Thing is, I'm pretty sure that fashion designing would be very difficult, plus the fact that I don't think I can sew For now, I'll just keep the thought of learning anything and try to have different jobs to keep me interesting. I personally don't like the fact of thinking a job as a job and that I must do it. More like I would want to be someone who does things willingly and not think, " Oh my! I have to do this and that etc..."

   I thought that a fashion designer would be hard due to the fact of experiencing sewing during 8th grade. Besides I do not think that my artistic skills are good enough, too lazy I guess? Also, the drama that I am watching is called " Tokyo Juliet" is based on fashion designing. I know this sounds really weird, one would think " Why would a drama affect a dream of what you want to be?" I don't know either I just want to experience the life a fashion designer for a day. Dentist? I don't even know if I can get the basics down. I'll just let myself fly to where ever it wants to go to in the future.

Animal Farm Project: Greed for Power

Greed for Power

By: Ting Liao

Animal Farm was once Manor Farm,

but the rebellion changed the animal's fate

the rebellion lead by Snowball

but later Napoleon took over.

Claiming that all animals were equal,

Then why oh why did the pigs

get more than what other animals get

and put above the other animals on the farm?

The windmill, once succeeded was then destroyed

by nature but was blamed on Snowball

if Snowball was the one that came up with the idea

then why oh why would he destroy it?

Rules state that an animal would not behave or participate in any human like thing

then why did Napoleon start trading with their neighboring farm?

Did the animals see what was coming their way?

If they did, they should've formed a rebellion.

"Beasts of England" once a honored song

taught by Old Major then banished from the animals

What would they expect when the symbol

of courage led them to where they were today, banished?

As Napoleon slowly acted as a human being,

what would the animals in the farm think?

Of course, they wouldn't dare rebel, but for once

I thought, what would happen if they rebel.

As they say, as one experiences something,

they will want more.

In this scenario, Napoleon got a taste of power

and later he wanted more power.

As one animal want more power,

the system of treating every one equally is broken.

Poetry Out Loud: Solitude

   So, at first when my english teacher told us to choose a poem from the website poetryoutloud.org, I was clueless on which poem I should recite and remember. There were so many poems that I just randomly picked the ones that had a pretty good tittle. As I looked at the ones that I picked, I saw that they were the ones that I didn't like or didn't make sense to me. Then I scroll down the page and thought about the meaning of the title and found " Solitude" by: Ella Wheeler Wilcox. When I looked at the poem I was freaked out if I could remember any poem by memory at all. Tonight, I took a look at the poem and tried to memorize it by memory and it didn't work really well. But, then I could recite from memory.

   I don't think I have to do many gestures for my poem. Probably I would do gestures sometime in the stanza to show the meaning of that line. But, what I 'm afraid is that I would tense up when I am in front of my classmates and forget my lines. For example, I can put my hand out when the at the part " Sing, and the hills will answer". Also, I can change the pitch or type of voice that I'm using to recite the poem. That is because for every positive thing there's a negative thing that is said about the subject.

   In the poem " Solitude" by Ella Wheeler Wilcox, I feel that she explains the negative and positive things about life and the reaction that we will get if this is the emotion that we show. I really like this poem, because I really agree with the opinions that are stated in the poem. What ever attitude and emotion that you produce on the outside will determine the reaction that you will get from people around. However, there are some people that actually get the opposite reaction of what they expect. For example, there could be a student that wants to get along with her/his classmates. In order to do that they try to be kind to them, but the reaction from their classmates could turn out to be a good or bad one. It varies because of how each person's mind process the emotion or feelings that is given to them.

FIve Part Paragraph Extra Credit

   So far one fourth of the school year has passed during my time at school in my English class, I found that I have developed a little bit on the things I needed to work on. There was one major thing that I needed to work on. That was to stay on topic, looking back on what I said about improvements, I saw that I need to work on my commentaries. I feel that I have improved throughout the year as I got to understand more in depth of a commentary about a concrete detail. Then, there was the transitions that I needed to improve on. I feel that I didn't really improve that much on this skill. But, I think that I should expand my vocabulary more than it is now to help pick transitions. Lastly, the flow of my writing, because to me it flows but when other people read it they say that it doesn't really flow. I think that I have seen why that is, by looking at the essay in another person's eye. Although, I haven't polish my writing skills much, I hope to make more improvements as the school year goes on.